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I Love to write!! I am very young, but currently working on my writing skills!! :wink: 

 

Out of the corner of my eye I saw him staring at me and pointing to the seat across from him, as if he wanted me to go and sit with him. Minutes went by, and I kept glancing back at him and he saw me in the process of doing this. I didn’t glance one time when he wasn’t starring at me. I slowly turned me head and saw him walking towards me. I quickly turned my head back around wondering what he was going to do. All of a sudden I felt a slight touch on my shoulder. I quickly turned around and saw him standing there. “Can we talk?” he asked “sure” I replied. He took my hand and led me to his table. He pulled out the chair for me, then went around and sat down in front of me. We sat there for a while until finally he spoke up. “Hi, my name is Jeremy. You must be Kristen” “Yea that’s me” I said looking down twirling my thumbs. “Would you like to go somewhere tonight with me Kristen?” Jeremy asked me with a big grin on his face. “That depends where you were thinking” I said looking at his face now. “I was hoping to surprise you!” I never had heard a more beautiful voice. “Well ok, but not too far out of town, my mom will through a fit” I answered in a truthful way. “Don’t worry I won’t take you that far. Can I pick you up at seven?” Jeremy asked while I wasn’t paying attention. “Seven what?” I asked confused. “Can I pick you up at seven?” Jeremy repeated “OH… yea sure sounds great!” I replied with my face turning red. “k well see you in class” he said as he was leaning towards me to give me a good bye hug! When he hugged me I noticed that his arms were freezing and that he smelt really good. He walked me to class and explained to the teacher why I was late, then he sat beside me and we smiled at each other just about every five seconds. When class was over I walked out the door with Jeremy right behind me. When I got out the door I felt a slight breeze. When I turned around Jeremy was gone. I walked to my next class, and sat there thinking about how Jeremy could disappear so quickly. When class was over I walked down the hall and out the front exit. I walked to my car and found Jeremy standing in front of my car door. “hi” I said getting his attention. “Oh hi, sorry I’m a little bit sleepy” he said opening his tightly closed eyelids. “Ok, so… how did you disappear after class when you were right behind me?” I asked still confused. “Oh I went back in the class room to ask Mr. Gordan {the chemistry teacher} a question about tonight’s homework” he said in a very convincing way. “Oh well can I get in my car now?” I asked anxious to get home. “Oh, yea sorry I didn’t realize I was blocking your car” he answered followed by a long yawn, he had good breath though. He moved out of the way, smiled and quickly turned and walked to his car. I opened my car door, slid in and cranked the engine. I quickly drove out of the parking lot noticing that Jeremy was standing by his car sleeping. I wondered how long he would sleep before he realizes he in sleeping standing up in a parking lot. I drove home quickly, but carefully. When I got home and pulled in the drive way noticing that my mom’s car was gone. I quickly ran inside and found a note on the counter top that said,

Dear Kristen,

        I am gone to the Hospital to work for my first night shift, so I will be home around 7 in the morning. Please try not to burn the house down.

love,

Mom

Her handwriting was the best handwriting in the world. I was happy that she was finally happy with her job! I slowly walked up the stairs and into my room. I got my clothes and went into the bathroom to take me a shower. After I had gotten dressed I blow dried my hair and went down stairs. When I got down the stairs I realized what I was forgetting. It was seven, Jeremy was supposed to pick me up. I quickly ran up the stairs and got dressed. When I was all prepped up I went down the stairs and glanced at the clock. It was to late, it was already nine. I ran upstairs with only one thought going through my head. He stood me up. I couldn’t believe it.

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